Xarrow Shield-Arm

Character Name:
Player Name:Xarrow Shield-Arm
Class & Level:Level 1 Fighter
Exp/Exp TNL:567/1,000
Race:Human
Alignment:True Neutral
Deity:St. Cuthbert
Size:Medium (usually Medium)
Age:28
Gender:Male
Height:6'2
Weight:225
Eyes:green
Hair:brown
Skin:caucasian
Speed:30 ft
Appearance: Picture please. (Not necessary)

STR:18 (+4)
DEX:18 (+4)
CON:18 (+4)
INT:16 (+3)
WIS:16 (+3)
CHA:16 (+3)

HP:14
AC:

10
+
3
+
2
+
3
+
0
+
0
+
0
=
18

Touch AC:

10
+
3
+
0
=
13

Flatfooted AC:

10
+
3
+
2
+
0
+
0
+
0
=
15

Initiative: 4

4
+
0
=
4

Saving Throws:
Fort: 2 + 4 + 0 + 0 = 6
Reflex: 0 + 4 + 0 + 0 = 4
Will: 0 + 3 + 0 + 0 = 3

Base Attack Bonus:+1
Spell Resistance:
Grapple: 1 + 4 + 0 + 0 = 5

Weapons:
Weapon: Long Sword
Attack Bonus:+5
Damage:1d8
Critical:19–20/×2
Range:Melee
Notes:1 spine in collection
Ammo

Gear:Scale mail armor, Tindertwig x4, torch x4, Grappling hook, Bedroll, Backpack, Crowbar, 1 Wooden Holy Symbol, Trail rations x6, Rope (Hempen) x2

Feats:Combat expertise, dodge, quick-draw

Special Abilities:None

Languages:Common, Draconic, Dwarven, Orcish.

Money:59gp 16sp 96cp

Spells Per Day:
0 -
1 -
2 -
3 -
4 -
5 -
6 -
7 -
8 -
9 -

Spells:
0 -
1 -
2 -
3 -
4 -
5 -
6 -
7 -
8 -
9 -

Spell Save DC:
0 -
1 -
2 -
3 -
4 -
5 -
6 -
7 -
8 -
9 -

Skills:20/20
Balance* (DEX) 6=4+2+0
Bluff* (CHA) 5=3+2+0
Climb* (STR) 6=4+2+0
Concentration* (CON) 5=4+1+0
Craft* (Shelter) (INT) 4=3+1+0
Craft* (Wooden Spear) (INT) 4=3+1+0
Craft* (Animal Trap) (INT) 4=3+1+0
Diplomacy* (CHA) 3=3+0+0
Disable Device (INT) 4=3+1+0
Gather Information* (CHA) 4=3+1+0
Handle Animal (CHA) 4=3+1+0
Heal* (WIS) 3=3+0+0
Hide* (DEX) 4=4+0+0
Intimidate* (CHA) 6=3+3+0
Jump* (STR) 4=4+0+0
Knowledge (Geogrophy Knowledge) (INT) 7=3+4+0
Knowledge (Combat Knowledge) (INT) 4=3+1+0
Knowledge (Nature Knowledge) (INT) 4=3+1+0
Listen* (WIS) 3=3+0+0
Move Silently* (DEX) 4=4+0+0
Open Lock (DEX) 4=4+0+0
Profession (Survivalist) (WIS) 3=3+0+0
Ride* (DEX) 4=4+0+0
Search* (INT) 3=3+0+0
Sense Motive* (WIS) 3=3+0+0
Spellcraft (INT) 3=3+0+0
Spot* (WIS) 3=3+0+0
Survival* (WIS) 5=3+2+0
Swim* (STR) 4=4+0+0
Tumble (DEX) 4=4+0+0
Use Rope* (DEX) 4=4+0+0

Ok,

First step, please fix your abilities. It's not your roll + the modifier = the ability. That "+4" or so, that's the modifier. Your stats should read as this:

STR: 18 (+4)
DEX: 18 (+4)
CON: 18 (+4)
INT: 16 (+3)
WIS: 16 (+3)
CHA: 16 (+3)

Scale mail only allows you up to 3 of your dex mod to apply to your AC. Therefore reducing your Dex bonus to AC by 1. Your new AC will be 18. Please edit this.

Please add your +1 to your BAB.

Please add your used/total skill points at the top of the list. It should read 20/20.

Make these minor changes, and you will be approved!

done

This Section:

Base Attack Bonus:
Spell Resistance:
Grapple: 1 + 4 + 0 + 0 = 5

Weapons:
Weapon: Long Sword
Attack Bonus:+1

Should read as:

Base Attack Bonus: +1
Spell Resistance:
Grapple: 1 + 4 + 0 + 0 = 5

Weapons:
Weapon: Long Sword
Attack Bonus:+5

Please fix that and you'll be all set.

done again

Approved. On to the level up section for thee!